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Tuesday 22 September 2020

Discovery of 
Ancient Egypt


Instructions:


Use the video to plan below, to write a story about Cairo, 1920, an archaeologist is about to discover the secret of the Egyptian Pyramids ...

Planning of your narrative writing:


Introduction: (Orientation: who, when, where)

Characters: What is going to happen to them?

Problem: What problem is going to happen in your story?

Solution: How will it resolve?



Include these words below in your writing:
Describe Settings:
Describe Characters
Describe Feelings
Describe Ancient Egypt
Line Starters
Breathe taking
Glorious
Magnificient
Spectacular
Majestic
Impressive

Creepy
Eerie
Spine-chilling
Unnerving 
Unappealing
Amiable
Charming
Delightful
Courageous
Fearless
Valiant

Obnoxious
Unpleasant
Repulsive
Enormous
humongous
Delighted
Ecstatic
Euphoric
Anxious
Uneasy
Apprehensive

Despondent
Petrified
Panic-stricken
Scared witless
convinced
Pyramids
Sphinx
Egyptian
Pharaoh
Mummy
Canopic Jars

Coffin
Hieroglyphics
Desert
Tomb
Suddenly ..
Never in my life ...
Barely alive…
I
In the blink of an eye … 

Immediately …

Almost unbelievably … 



Start Writing below: 2   paragraphs




In the video that i just finished watching,it was kinda funny because when the character got inside the Pyramids it went so dark and scary. When the camel ate that blue thing and ate it like it was food. It changed face and face and face and face until it’s face looked like a camel. After that the camel swallowed it. The pyramids down the face went down.



When the face went down it took like 10 seconds to get down then it stopped moving and found a spot to kick the man out the dark and throwed him to where the blue thing came from. The camel looked at him and began to look at the pyramids so then the man did it.

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