Discovery of
Ancient Egypt
Instructions:
Use the video to plan below, to write a story about Cairo, 1920, an archaeologist is about to discover the secret of the Egyptian Pyramids ...
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In the video that i just finished watching,it was kinda funny because when the character got inside the Pyramids it went so dark and scary. When the camel ate that blue thing and ate it like it was food. It changed face and face and face and face until it’s face looked like a camel. After that the camel swallowed it. The pyramids down the face went down.
When the face went down it took like 10 seconds to get down then it stopped moving and found a spot to kick the man out the dark and throwed him to where the blue thing came from. The camel looked at him and began to look at the pyramids so then the man did it.
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